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Stuart Dakin ([personal profile] thesubjunctive) wrote in [personal profile] extendedmetaphor 2012-10-13 09:32 pm (UTC)

"Technique could use some work?"

Dakin frowned, pulling back from the kiss. It had been a wank, not another essay. It hadn't been given to be critiqued. It had been given so that he could hear how amazing he was, to give pleasure and get appreciation and approval in return. "Is that seriously what you say right after that sort of thing? Technique could use work?"

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