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"Do you think we might go somewhere a bit more private?"

He really didn't need any more urging that that. They were in a hotel, after all, and it wasn't very hard to find a room with an unlocked door, an unrumpled bed. Kicking the door shut behind them, Irwin tugged Dakin back in against him, kissing him harder, hungrier, deeper than before.

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With his free hand, he groped for Dakin's hand, wanting more, needing just a little bit more.

"God, please."

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Dakin let his hand be gripped and guided, not about to try to be difficult now. He felt too satisfied for even some momentary cruelness.